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[吃喝玩乐] [推荐][ 中 篇 小 説 ] 人鬼情未了..好好睇噶..廣東話噶

吹啊 发布于2006-5-22 22:03 1993 次浏览 15 位用户参与讨论   [复制分享主题]
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吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:03:30 | 显示全部楼层
故事主角** 小津(我) 我自細就擁有一雙陰陽眼...<BR>由細到大都會見到1d 平常人見唔到既野... \\\ 鬼-<BR>我ar爸&amp;ar媽都係一個普通人....但係因為出生時份有差異....所以.,.....<BR>我而加15歲...係15年前既農曆7月14既搭正12點....我係某一間醫院出世.....<BR>我聽番我ar媽講,, 佢生我果陣突別痛....而醫生都覺得好奇怪.......<BR>我慢慢咁大....自從我識講野....識得睇外面既世界之後.....<BR>我就覺得好多奇怪野,,,,係我身邊經過./...<BR>我 當 時我成日問我ar媽....點解...點解....?? ( 問果d都係好奇怪既野 )<BR>而我ar媽慢慢發覺我有d奇怪....直至有一日....<BR>我ar媽同我一齊去拜神....果陣我5歲.... <BR>我覺得拜神係一件悶事.....當我同我ar媽拜完神諗住走果陣....<BR>有個睇相老叫住我地.....同我ar媽講左句....<BR>睇相老 : 你個女好特別喎.....有冇興趣黎聽下??<BR>之後我ar媽就拖左我過左去.....我果陣咩都唔知....坐定定係度.....<BR>果陣我細個都唔知佢講咩......<BR>睇相老 : 小朋友..拎你隻手出黎比粒糖糖你....<BR>我一聽到哩句...就即刻比左隻手佢la....點知厄人既...<BR>佢係咁望我隻手掌...又係咁望住我個樣....<BR>又問我ar媽..我幾時出世....幾多點果d....<BR>睇相老: 妹妹...你而加掙大你隻眼...<BR>之後我就掙大la...我聽到佢同我ar媽講.....<BR>睇相老 : 因為你個女出世既時候咁岩係鬼門關開正既時候....<BR>所以佢有一對陰陽眼....因為佢而加仲細個....<BR>越大佢就會習慣ga啦...不過唔洗特別驚佢...<BR>但係要小心照慣佢....<BR>就係哩幾句既野...令到我ar媽同我ar爸由果日開始就更加鍚我.....<BR>要咩有咩....想去邊就去邊,....要$有$.....<BR>我細個都唔知咩叫陰陽眼既....總之....覺得果個睇相老好好人la....<BR>因為...佢令到我成為佢地心目中寵愛既小公主.... <BR>入到幼稚園之後...我識左好多好多新朋友....<BR>一直生活都無憂無淚....可能因為我性格開朗....<BR>對人好好所以都好受同學仔歡迎,,,,<BR>但係講真果句啦....咁耐以黎都冇興祝過生日,,,,同埋開過生日會...<BR>所以我自己一路都唔知自己係幾時生日ga....<BR>不過我要咩有咩既.....生日都冇咩特別....<BR>我仲係miss心目中係個好乖既女仔....成績仲好好tim....<BR>哩種生活令我成個人都開朗左....成日都笑.....好童真...<BR>咁樣就過左一個正常既幼稚園生捱la.....<BR>6歲果年我升左一間好小學....第一日番學...miss掉位....<BR>掉左個男仔...係我隔離....因為我係一個好主動既人,,所以.....<BR>我主動去識佢.....<BR>我:你好ar....我叫小津....多多指教...^^(伸隻手出黎)<BR>果個男仔: 我叫森仔.....(佢握我隻手)<BR>由哩2句開始...我地就成為好朋友......<BR>放左學....我同森仔都要坐校車番屋企ga....<BR>點知原來咁有緣喎.....佢同我住埋同一棟樓....<BR>仲要同一層....我地都係住25樓...不過最衰唔係隔離憐舍la....<BR>但係都幾近下.....我地成日都一齊玩.....<BR>我ar媽又識佢ar媽....所以我地成日都去大家既屋企玩....<BR>我地成日拖住手一齊去玩ga....<BR>有一日...我ar媽戴左我去佢屋企玩... <BR>我地坐低一齊畫畫la....我見到佢拎住支珍寶殊....<BR>我就話<BR>我 : 你有得食我冇得食...我又要....&gt;&lt;<BR>森 : 拿....有ar..我食過ga..你要唔要ar??<BR>我 : 好過冇.....<BR>森 : 拿.....<BR>之後我就拎左佢d口水尾黎食la....haha細細個係咁ga啦....<BR>之後計續畫我地既畫.....<BR>我見到森畫左1男1女...拖住手<BR>我好奇問佢....<BR>我 : 哩2個邊個黎ga??<BR>森 : 個男仔就係我...個女仔就係你.....(佢面紅)<BR>我 : 我個頭邊有咁大ar??<BR>森 : 唔好意c lo....畫大左之麻.....<BR>我 : 你睇下我哩幅.....(我畫左一間屋同一個細路女)<BR>森 : 你畫得都唔靚既...<BR>我 : 你果幅先唔靚ar...<BR>森 : 我地加埋一家人黎ga....<BR>我 : 係ar...哩間就係我地第時既屋啦...<BR>我ar媽話ar....老公要比晒d $ 老婆洗ga...<BR>你都要比晒我.....<BR>森 : 緊係冇問題la....我大個要做醫生.....<BR>我 : 嘩...你做唔做到ga....<BR>森 : 緊係得la....我咁醒目....<BR>我 : 咁我大個要做病人..<BR>森 : 嘩...嘜你咁ga....<BR>我 : 係ar..冇人搵你醫病果陣....我比$你..你幫我睇病.....<BR>.......................................細細個每一日就係咁同森仔相處.....<BR>每一次有人蝦我....佢都會扮超人出黎救我.......<BR>當我唔開心佢會比支珍寶珠我哄我.....我好鐘意同佢1齊ga...<BR>我大個要搵佢做我老公,,,,哩個係我細細個既夢想.,.,.<BR>我地一齊相處左3年....<BR>至到小學3年班果一日,,,,,有一次..我地2個係屋企睇電視.... <BR>我 : e.....,,佢地係度咀aR....<BR>森 : 兒童不宜ar....<BR>我 : 鍚鍚咩味ga??<BR>森 : 我都未試過點知喎......<BR>我 : 咁不如試下lo....<BR>之後我地就試下有咩味la,,,,,,我地2個既初吻就咁冇左la...ha...<BR>我地1路生活得好開心.....<BR>1齊番學...1齊放學,,,,,1齊玩,,,生活得好開心ga....<BR>我覺得比佢錫同比ar媽ar爸鍚好唔同.....,,,,同佢一齊特別開心d ga...<BR>好快咁就過左1年la....<BR>升左4年級我仍然同佢係同1班,,,,,,,,,,,,<BR>唔知哩d叫唔叫緣份呢?<BR>我地仍然日日都一齊,,,,,<BR>但係到左農曆7月14果1日.....我親手殺死左佢.....
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:06:43 | 显示全部楼层
話說每一年既農曆7月14日,,,,我都係360日之中最唔開心既一日.....<BR>點解??我ar媽對我冇咩要求...惟一要求就係...每年既農曆7月14..<BR>我都要係9點前上床訓交...同埋成日都唔比我踏出門口一步.....<BR>每到哩一日我都會訓唔著同埋訓得好唔舒服,,,<BR>以前就話細個姐...但係因為我越黎越大既關係....好唔鐘意咁樣....<BR>就算係要番學都要我請假.....係我9歲果年(4年級)既7月14....<BR>咁岩係唔洗番學既一日,,,,我又要留係屋企la..<BR>我係屋企真係好悶ar...我係一個好動既人,,,<BR>冇可能要我坐定定做一樣野....果一日,,,<BR>我係度發我ar媽脾氣,,,,因為佢唔比我出街玩.....&gt;&lt;<BR>我真係好憎我ar媽ar,,,,佢咩都肯買比我,,但係就係唔比我出去,,,,<BR>冇lala聽到門鐘響,,,,,<BR>係森仔同佢ar媽,,,,,原來森仔個ar爸同佢ar媽嗌交ar....佢地唔想嗌交影響個仔....<BR>所以要我ar媽睇住森仔......(我心入面好開心...因為有人陪我玩la)<BR>下晝果陣7點幾,.,,,我地係度食緊晚飯,,,,<BR>媽 : ar津.....食完飯好番去訓交ga啦....<BR>我 : 哦....(點解次次都要咁早訓ga...)<BR>媽 : 森仔會訓你隔離果間房,,,聽日訓醒...戴你地去玩...好冇??<BR>我同森仔 : 好ya,,,,,<BR>食完飯,,我見到我ar媽拎左好多野出黎~好似準備去邊咁....<BR>有元寶立足....陰司紙....燈,,紙扎33果d野,,,,<BR>我就好好奇問我ar媽la...<BR>我 : 媽,,,,你做咩拎咁多野出黎既??<BR>媽 : 你唔好理咁多la...食完飯好訓la,,,<BR>我 : 哦,,,,,(其實我知佢今晚會出去ga啦,,,haha)<BR>我食完飯拿拿臨上床扮訓交la,,,<BR>到左夜晚..我聽到出面拍一聲...証實我ar媽已經出左門...<BR>咁我就但起身拍森仔對門la....<BR>森 :你做咩仲唔訓交ar??<BR>我 :次次到左哩日都要我咁早訓,,,,哼,,,今晚我要你陪我玩...<BR>森 :今晚鬼節ar...不如講鬼故ar,,,,<BR>我 :好ar,,,我唔驚你ga...<BR>之後我地熄晒燈,,,坐係餐台度,,,森仔就講鬼故比我聽啦.... <BR>佢一路講...我好專注咁望住佢,,,,,,<BR>講講下.,,,,,我見到有一隻血琳琳既手係森仔個博頭到,,,<BR>越行越近...越行越近.....我見到有隻長頭髮既紅色女鬼,,,,,<BR>佢有好長好長既頭髮,,我呆左咁望住佢,,,<BR>我個心不停咁跳....卜卜..卜卜...<BR>好驚,,,,好驚,,,我唔知點算好,,,,<BR>我係咁用野拋佢,,我好驚,,,,,佢一直企係森仔後面,,,好貼好貼...<BR>我跑去牆角果度坐係度係咁喊,,..之後森仔行埋黎..<BR>森 :你有冇事ar?你係唔係好驚ar?我唔講la,,,你唔好咁la,,,<BR>之後我一望上去...我見到隻女鬼跟住佢ar,,,,<BR>我:呀!!!!!!!!!!你走ar,,,,,你走ar(我係咁叫佢走,,,)<BR>我係咁震,,,我好驚好驚,.,,,我係度係咁大喊...<BR>之後森仔行左去開燈,,,,點知開極都開唔到.....<BR>森 :死la...停左電ar,,,,點解開唔到既...(佢都開始有d驚)<BR>我 : 唔係,,,,,我見到..果個女鬼,,,,,,.(我大嗌大喊)<BR>之後佢話<BR>森 :邊度有女鬼ar??你唔好自己嚇自己la...<BR>我 :有ar,,,,(之後我見到地下好多刀刀叉叉,,,)<BR>之後森行埋黎,,,,對住我坐,,,,<BR>我 : 呀,,,,,,,,你走ar,,,(之後我除地拎起把刀係咁咪埋眼向住果隻女鬼插,,,,,)<BR>一刀....二刀,,,,,三刀...我咪埋眼,,,係咁插...插左好多好多刀,.,,,,,<BR>死左la...佢應該死左la....我慢慢開眼.....點知.................................... <BR>之後我一開眼,,,,見到森仔訓左係度....掙大隻眼,,,,,望住我,,,<BR>果隻女鬼消失左la,,,,之後我推左森仔一下....<BR>佢冇應我....我好驚,..,,.我再推多佢一下...<BR>佢都冇反應,,,,我係漆黑既環境低下,.,,漫漫爬過去,,,佢身邊,,,,<BR>我見到佢登大隻眼一直望坐我,,,,,我見到佢個肚,,,<BR>佢個肚,,,,,有好多.......刀,,,,,痕...<BR>我唔知點算....我好驚,,,,,,我係咁係度發din...<BR>我 : 你唔可以死ga,,,,,,,之後,,,,,除左佢件衫,,,,,<BR>之後即刻去拎針線.....<BR>即刻將佢d皮肉聯番埋一齊.....一針一針,,,,一針一針咁....<BR>成地都係血.....佢流左好多血.....好多血,,,,<BR>我即刻拎左條濕毛巾....抹抹抹抹.....抹佢身上既血.....<BR>之後我拖左佢去我間床度訓,,,,,<BR>佢一直冇咪埋眼.....我攬住佢訓.....<BR>我 : 你做咩唔咪埋眼訓ar??<BR>我岩岩係唔係整痛你ar??對唔住ar....聯番ga啦,,,, <BR>我 : 你做咩唔應我ar..你唔好嬲我la....我唔想ga..,..<BR>之後我用隻手幫佢合埋隻眼...(由個頭掃落個鼻度,,,)<BR>合埋左la,,,,點知................佢冇lala掙大隻眼望住我.,,,,<BR>佢cool住我條頸,,,,,,,<BR>我 :唔好ar,,,,你做咩ar.,..好痛ar...(我用盡最後一分力嗌) <BR>我一醒番....係番間床度....我見到森仔仲訓係我隔離......<BR>原來琴日,,,發夢,,,,佢死左,,,冇可能再番生,,,<BR>我見到有好多蟲係佢個肚度.....d線開始鬆la,,,,<BR>我 : 我琴晚係唔係聯得唔夠實ar??下....<BR>d蟲好可惡ar...佢咁樣對你...唔可以...<BR>之後我係床角拎左支殺蟲水不斷噴.....<BR>我:我要你地死係我面前,,,唔可以傷害佢,,,,<BR>突然有人巧門,,,,,<BR>我即刻用將被蓋住森仔,,,,<BR>開左對門,,,,,<BR>我 : 媽 ?<BR>媽 : ar 女(佢一滴一滴既眼淚,,,,)<BR>我 : 冇事ar,,,,媽....唔好喊la??<BR>媽 : 森仔ar媽同ar爸死左.....<BR>我 : 點,,,,,,,解....??(我好驚訝)<BR>媽 :佢地琴日嗌交,,,森仔ar媽錯手殺死左佢ar爸,,,再自殺,,,,,,<BR>我 : 點,,,,,解,,會咁??<BR>媽 : 我琴日係樓下見到森仔個ar媽係上面跳落黎,,,<BR>我唔知,,,我咩都唔知,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,<BR>最後我ar媽都發現森仔條c係我屋企,,,,報警,,,<BR>d警察話森仔係自殺......佢地搬走左佢條c ar....唔可以搬走佢ga....<BR>我 : 媽..唔可以比佢地搬走佢ga.....<BR>媽佢鎖住我係間房度..唔比我出去,,,,,<BR>我 : 你放我出去ar....唔可以搬走佢ga....我既野你地唔可以拎走ga,,,<BR>嗌左好耐都冇人應我,,,,,<BR>我 : 森仔 <BR>我覺得好奇怪....點解哩家人會一次過死係農曆7月14ga呢??<BR>我 : 森仔,,,,,我好掛住你ar....冇人理我ga啦,,,得你一個炸....<BR>頭7果日你一定要番黎搵我ar,,,,無論你變左d咩..我都會見到你ga.....<BR>過左一個禮拜倒,,,,7月21日既夜晚,,,,<BR>我係房度冇訓過交,,,,,,我要等佢黎....我知佢一定會黎.....<BR>一搭正12點....佢係我床角,,,,,<BR>我見到佢la,,,,佢個肚仍然有好多好多刀........痕,,,<BR>我 :你終於黎la,,,,,(我忍唔住喊)<BR>森 : 吾.......<BR>我 : 我好掛住你ar,,<BR>森 :我唔會走,,,我會一直陪住你,,,,,<BR>我 :對唔住ar.........我,,,,,,<BR>森 :我冇怪你,,,,而加都好ar,,,得你一個見到我~已經足夠ga啦,,,,<BR>我 : 你唔可以再咁講ga.....<BR>消失左la,...唔見左既??點解唔見左既,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,<BR>我 : 森仔,,,你係邊ar...我未講完ga,,,你唔好咁快走ar,,,,<BR>之後我見到有2個人拎住d野係我間房飄過.....<BR>我 :我知la,,,,鬼差.......係ar,,,,唔可以比佢捉到你ga森仔...你要走快d ar,,,
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:07:39 | 显示全部楼层
自從哩一日,,,,,,我成個人變晒....一d都唔似自己<BR>番到學校,,,,,個個都驚我,,,避我....冇人同我講野,,,,,,個個當我怪獸咁睇<BR>我自己一個坐係課室,,,,,,以前天真活潑既性格都冇晒,,,,,<BR>我日日都好唔開心,,,,而森晚晚都會黎陪我傾計...我覺得咁樣夠ga啦,,,,<BR>直至6年級,,,,,,,有一日... <BR>有3個男仔係隔離班掉黎我地班,,,有個叫ar深....有個叫ar偉,,有個叫ar康<BR>我一聽到佢地既自我介紹,,,我即刻呆左,,,,,ar深 ??? 佢番生???<BR>唔係,,,唔同樣ga..不過我已經對佢有些小好感,,,,,因為??佢個名,,,,<BR>miss將ar康同ar偉掉左去我前面果2個位,,,,<BR>miss : 冇位啦喎......<BR>深 : 呢....果個女仔隔離咪有個lo,,,,,(佢指住我,,)<BR>miss : 咁ar,,,,,,,,(好由疑)好la,,,你坐住先la,,,,<BR>點解哩個miss會咁??係因為個個都驚左我..包括哩個miss,,,,,<BR>之後深就坐左係我隔離la,,,,<BR>深 : hi,,,你叫咩名ar??<BR>我 : (冇理佢,,,,,)<BR>深 : 嘜你咁ga...做個fd得唔得ar??<BR>之後我後面果個女仔拍佢,,,,,同佢講,,,<BR>(( 喂 ....你唔好同佢傾計ar,,,,,個個都驚左佢ga,,,佢好恐怖ga,,,<BR>等等...............................................講左好多~ ))<BR>深 : 有陰陽眼有咩咁大不了,,,,,又咪人一個...<BR>我 : (我唔知點解聽到好開心....可能佢惟一一個係唔驚我既人掛)<BR>深 : 唔怪得岩岩miss都唔比我同你一齊坐la,,,,<BR>我 : 你唔鐘意坐可以唔坐ga,,,,<BR>深 : 我至唔會驚你ar,,,,,<BR>唔通我同個&lt;森&gt;字咁有緣 ?? <BR>過左一個小息...<BR>深 : 你真係臭名遠播喎.....成間學校都知你係幾利害,,,<BR>我 : 係ar...你唔想死,,,就小心d.....<BR>深 :你而加嚇我ar??我至唔驚ar....驅驅一個女仔..,..怕什麼??<BR>我 :(( 我冇應佢 ))<BR>深 :你點解笑都唔笑下ga??笑多d唔會笑爛個口ga喎....<BR>我 : 咁又點,,,<BR>深 : 女仔cool到你咁,,,<BR>深 : miss岩岩叫左我出去..佢係咁同我講你d歷屎,,,,, 嚇到我都有d 驚驚地,.....<BR>我 : 驚就唔好坐係我隔離la,,,,<BR>深 : 我驚就唔會坐你隔離啦....都唔知有咩好驚,,,,,<BR>深 : 你好神秘,,,,,, 我反而想知道你更多既野....<BR>(我對佢d好感越黎越多,,,,哩一日可以話係番咁耐...最開心既一日)<BR>到左放學,,,,,,,,<BR>深 : 你住邊ga?....<BR>我 :關你咩事,,,,<BR>深 :問下姐.,,,,<BR>之後我就慢慢行番屋企la.....我見到佢一直跟係我後面..... <BR>行到一半我停低....<BR>我 : 你做咩跟住我ar?<BR>深 : 條街又唔係你既,,,<BR>我無可奈何,,惟有唔理佢la,,,,,,反正都唔鐘意講野,,,,,<BR>直至搭升降機,,,,,我又見到佢同我搭埋同一部升降機.....<BR>我按25樓....((( 成架升降機得我地2個..... )))<BR>我 : 喂....你跟夠未ar??<BR>深 : 幾時有跟你姐.....你住25樓ga??<BR>我 : 唔係25樓就唔會按25樓la,,,,你唔係想跟埋我番屋企ar??<BR>深 : 得鬼閒ar,,,,我住哩度ga,,,,<BR>我 : 你唔係想話住係我屋企ar??<BR>到左25樓,,,我行出去....點知佢跟住我.....<BR>直至我行到屋企門口開門..我見到佢係我對面間屋開門...<BR>我 : 你唔係住哩度ar??? ( 我令過頭 )<BR>深 : 你唔係住哩度ar??? ( 佢回應 )<BR>我 : 係又點ar....<BR>深 : 係又點ar....<BR>之後我冇理佢...入左屋......<BR>我 : 媽,,,,,做咩隔離屋會多左個男仔既.,,,,,<BR>媽 : 隔離果個ar姨個姪仔黎ga.,,,,,<BR>我 : 哦................<BR>媽 : 好耐之前搬左過黎...係你成日都屈係屋企先見唔到姐,,,<BR>我 : 哦................<BR>之後我番番自己間房,,,,一路等夜晚,,,,,,<BR>我 :12點la,,,,點解佢仲未黎ga......<BR>12點01分,,,,,12點02分,,,,,,12點03分,,,,<BR>我 : 過晒鐘啦.....佢唔係比人捉左咁好彩ar??? <BR>佢果晚冇黎到......<BR>我等左佢好耐都未訓交,,,,,我好擔心點解佢唔黎既???
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:08:25 | 显示全部楼层
到左第2日......我出門口番學la,,,,<BR>我見到ar深......<BR>深 : 嘩,,,,我隔離屋幾時養左隻熊貓我都唔知ga....<BR>我 : (我啤住佢)<BR>深 : 我唔想神早流流比人啤ar.....唔該哩位熊小姐....對我禮貌d好冇??<BR>我 : (我啤住佢,,,,不過真係好想笑出黎....但係...可能太耐冇笑過la.....好笑都唔會笑出面)<BR>深 : 而加d絕種熊貓咁惡ga.....都唔知d人點訓練佢ga.....<BR>我 : 你信唔信我打你ar拿....<BR>深 : 你信唔信我企係度比你打ar拿 ??<BR>我耐佢唔何.....我咁多年冇接觸過人....所以.....都唔係好想同佢傾計....<BR>我一路行番學一路就啤佢,,,,而佢就一路行番學一路望下望下我......<BR>直至番學......<BR>miss : ar深,,,,,哩度有個位.,,,你坐果度la,,,,(佢指住離我好遠既單丁位...)<BR>我 : (我一直啤住個miss)<BR>深 : 下.,...做咩掉我位ar,,,而加咪好地地,,,,,<BR>miss : 校長既意c.....<BR>深惟有掉la,,,,,我隔離再次空左個位la....<BR>就當ar深係一個係我身邊擦過既人la,,,,擦過就算啦,,,,唔好再記得佢....<BR>我永遠知道我心入面得森仔一個......<BR>為左佢...我唔理人地點避我....點話我恐怖.........只要森仔與我同在...^^<BR>上堂既時候....我時不時會令過去望ar深.........點解自己會咁ga呢???<BR>可能,,,,,,佢係我惟一既朋友掛....... <BR>放學果陣......<BR>我行行下就見到ar深la....唔知點解..有一種超級開心既感覺.....<BR>佢過黎叫我........<BR>深 : 小津.....<BR>我 : (我望左一望....)<BR>深 : 一齊行番去la.....<BR>我 : 哦<BR>深 : 唉.....果個miss將我掉到咁老遠......<BR>我 : 正常la....佢唔會比任何人坐我隔離ga...<BR>你坐左2日已經係好好彩ga啦!!<BR>深 : 都唔明你有咩咁恐怖.....直多咪隻眼.....咁鬼大....<BR>我 : ((我冇應佢))<BR>深 : 其實我真係好想知你究竟諗緊d咩.....<BR>第一日入課室....我就比你吸引住.......<BR>我 :磁鐵咩....<BR>深 : 錯la...比磁鐵更利害,,,,,<BR>講講下我就到左屋企la....我即刻入左屋企間房......<BR>打開計續寫我本日記la.....我覺得哩一日可以咁多年黎最開心果日....<BR>(((難道我已愛上了他???沒有可能的喔,,,我心中只有森一人....為什麼會這樣的??<BR>究竟我心中想的是什麼無聊東西..............??錯了....我發覺我是十分喜歡他......))) <BR>冇lala我ar媽叫我......<BR>媽 : 有人拍門ar.....去開啦....<BR>我 : (出左去開)<BR>我一開就見到ar康同ar偉......<BR>我 : 咩事ar?<BR>康 : 我地搵ar深ga...eee.......你同佢齊住ga??<BR>我 : 痴線....哩間我間屋黎ga.....你要搵果個係隔離...(指住對面間屋)<BR>偉 : 魚皮ar...走la..<BR>康 : 一時睇錯野姐....冇野la咁....<BR>我 : (拍埋對門....)<BR>媽 : 邊個黎ga??<BR>我 : 冇ar...唔識ga...禁錯門鐘...<BR>媽 : 哦.....食飯la....<BR>食完飯我又番番去間房......因為琴晚冇咩訓過.....<BR>所以好早就訓左la.....<BR>一起身.....我見到一張子同一個公仔.....<BR>張子紅卜卜咁....好明顯係用血寫既......<BR>寫左一個字....就係個 [ 津 ]字,,,,,,,<BR>而個公仔好細個...係個男仔黎既.....佢個肚插住左支有血既針......<BR>後面寫左個 [ 深 ]字.......<BR>我 : 我估到啦.....係森仔寫ga,,,,,,,<BR>佢琴晚黎過ar......點解.....點解佢要留哩d野比我ar...... <BR>我一路行一路諗一路番學.....點解佢要咁做呢??<BR>我好後悔琴晚訓著左.......<BR>番到學校見到深坐係我隔離.....我就好奇問佢la....<BR>我 : 做咩你係度既??<BR>深 : 做咩你又係度既??<BR>我 : 哩度我個位黎ga...我唔係度坐係邊ar??<BR>深 : 哩度我個位黎ga...我唔係度坐係邊ar??<BR>我 : 費是同你講.....<BR>深 : 費是同你講....<BR>miss入到黎就教書....miss都冇鬧.......咁佢就一直坐係我隔離la....<BR>上上下堂.....miss行埋去ar深個位度話.....<BR>miss : xx深.....做咩你會坐係度既???<BR>深 : 果個位睇唔到野ar....<BR>miss : 咁你就可以私自掉位ga咩??<BR>深 : 咁樣係為我自己著想,,,,我唔想睇唔到黑板咁上堂.....<BR>miss : 你........咁我同你掉過第2個位.....<BR>深 : 洗咩咁煩ar....哩個位咪好地地.......<BR>miss : 咁你....(指住我)坐去果度.....(指住ar深以前坐既單丁位)...<BR>我惟有掉過去la.....汁書包掉位.....<BR>深 : miss...都話果個位睇唔到野...仲要人地掉過去.....<BR>miss : 你同我收聲......<BR>ar偉 : 你唔好嘈住先la....<BR>我一直啤住哩條miss.....<BR>miss : 好la...落堂la...唔該你(指住我)唔好攪咁多小玩意.....<BR>xx深你同我出黎....<BR>之後ar深就跟左佢出去...... <BR>一堂一堂咁上......番屋企途中.....<BR>深 : (跑埋黎)e....我又撞到你la....<BR>我 : 哦.....<BR>深 : 唔好意c喎....攪到你姑令令自一個坐係果個位.......<BR>我 : 你知就好la...<BR>深 : 點會唔知ar...我都係度ga果陣.....<BR>我 : (苦笑)(因為我唔知比咩反應佢)<BR>深 : 我第一次見你笑ar....<BR>我 : 咁你咪有福lo~...<BR>深 : 一d都唔覺,,....我覺得唔好彩就真.....<BR>我 : 你試下再講多次.....<BR>深 : 我做咩要聽你講ar<BR>之後就番番屋企lu~.....我又再次寫番果本日記......<BR>哩本日記....小森死左之後就再冇寫到la....只係琴日拎番出黎寫,,,,<BR>我拎起支筆寫,,,<BR>((( 今天一早森仔送給我2份的禮物....不知道為什麼他要這樣做......<BR>今天.....我十分憎恨那個非常討厭的miss)))<BR>之後我就坐係度等森仔黎la..... <BR>可能真係好眼訓....今晚唔知幾時就訓著埋.....
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:09:56 | 显示全部楼层
一蕉早ar媽就拍我....<BR>媽 : ar女....番學la...仲訓.....<BR>我 : 知道la.....(我一起身就望下我張床,,,,睇下森仔有冇放低d野....)<BR>係冇ga...<BR>我 : 唔知佢琴晚有冇黎呢.....<BR>一番到學校,,,都係坐番個單丁位......<BR>冇lala 校長入黎(隔離仲有一個好靚既miss)......<BR>校長 : 各位同學.....哩一位就係你地既新班主任la.......以後佢就係你地班既miss...<BR>康 : 咁果個miss呢??<BR>校長 : 佢............................突然有事..要離開....總之你地要聽哩個新mis話啦~~<BR>新miss : 你地好....我叫miss lee.....我係你地既新班主任.....<BR>深 : miss.....你有冇男朋友ar??<BR>新miss : 好la....哩d野唔好問la....我地開始上堂la.....<BR>深 : 可唔可以掉番果位女同學(指住我)去我隔離ar??<BR>新miss : um...好la...如果你地成日傾計既話我就會掉你位ga啦...<BR>深 : miss你心地又靚又好ar...<BR>新miss : 唔好嘈la....而加開始上堂...<BR>之後我就掉番去佢隔離la....<BR>我心諗.....點解會咁既??<BR>佢走左就真係好.....不過總係覺得件事怪怪地........點解呢點解呢???<BR>落左堂.....我行出去廁所.....我見到校長同個新miss傾計.....<BR>校長 : 唉...我都估唔到會發生d咁既事.....<BR>miss lee : 唔好咁la...節哀順變la.....我會好好咁睇住哩班ga啦.<BR>我心諗.....:節哀順變唔係d人死左先至講ga咩??<BR>之後我又聽到佢地講野,...<BR>校長 : 平時我都覺得佢幾開朗ga.....冇咩憂心既野...都唔明點解佢......<BR>miss lee : 係lo.....我識佢咁耐都未試過話諗唔開既.......<BR>校長 : 唉....今次要麻煩你la....<BR>miss lee : 唔緊要啦....反正我都好鐘意細路仔既.....<BR>校長 : 唉........<BR>我心諗......死左???<BR>之後我就入左班房la....<BR>深 : 喂.....我係唔係好好人呢.....我由黑暗中戴番你番黎呀.....<BR>我 : (啤住佢)<BR>深 : 嘩...嘜你咁ga....多謝都冇句.......<BR>我 : (啤住佢)<BR>深 : 算la......同你講都冇咩心情ga啦......<BR>上上下堂.....<BR>深 : 係呢....你揀邊間中學ar?? <BR>我 : xxxx中學.....<BR>深 : o.....我揀xx中學....<BR>我 : 哦.....<BR>放學...我同ar深一齊行番屋企.....<BR>深 : 過埋哩幾日就放暑假la...都唔知有冇機會再見到你lu~....<BR>我 : 唔好見仲好....當我冇識過你....(其實我自己好唔開心ga)<BR>深 : 估唔到你咁絕情ar?<BR>我心諗.... (又點ar??過埋哩幾日都冇得見lo...我唔想再對佢有任何留戀)<BR>番到屋企我照舊日日都寫我本日記.....<BR>我日日都好早訓左交....唔知點解我再冇恆心去等森仔黎la....<BR>(( 最後一天了.....我再也不會遇見他.......他只在我人生中擦過.....不知為何....<BR>森仔的情......已一步一步地被ar深覆蓋了,,,為什麼???我連等他的勇氣也沒了....)) <BR>今晚我好唔開心.....過埋今日我就冇可能再日日同佢一齊番學放學....坐佢隔離lu....<BR>可能只係隔離鄰社.....得閒打聲招呼.....好唔開心.....係度喊....又訓唔著.....<BR>諗諗下野.......我見到森仔......原來已經諗左好耐ga啦.....<BR>我好耐冇見過佢(森仔)la......佢個樣....佢個肚.....<BR>佢今晚就企係我面前......我只係呆坐咁望住佢.....<BR>以前既我......我一定會樸過去....而加既我......點解會呆左咁坐係度...冇反應??<BR>我見到佢....我就諗番起我同佢細個一齊玩.....果d情景,...<BR>我地大家對望左好耐.......佢塊面多左好多條血痕.......我已經冇勇氣去問佢哩樣野la....<BR>我 : 係唔係你做既??(講緊個miss既死)<BR>森 : 係.....<BR>我 : 點解 ......<BR>森 : 因為佢對你唔好....<BR>我 : (我喊)佢對我唔好就要殺左佢ga啦?<BR>森 : 係......一律殺.....<BR>我 : 你咁樣會加重你d罪孽ga...咁樣你冇可能再投胎ga啦.....<BR>森 : 我唔理....我要一直係你身邊保護你....<BR>我 : 我唔想你做遊魂野鬼ar.....<BR>森 : 你係唔係鐘意第2個所以要我走??你以前唔係咁ga.....<BR>你見到我會好開心ga.......你唔會叫我走....仲會晚晚都等我黎ga.....點解而加變晒ga??<BR>我 : 唔係唔係......<BR>森 : 我唔捨得你呀....我係唔會走ga.....(佢流眼淚...)<BR>我好唔開心.....我聽到哩d野....我個心有種唔知點既感覺....<BR>佢同其他鬼唔同....佢係一個識大既鬼.....<BR>我聽人講....如果每年你幫果個人興祝生日既話...佢就會一路大....<BR>因每年佢生日果日我都會去到佢屋企幫佢興祝生日.....所以佢係同我同年.....<BR>森 : 你唔好喊la......我好驚見到女仔喊ga.....<BR>我 : (我忍唔住攬住佢係咁喊)<BR>森 : 我會一直咁保護你ga...<BR>我 : 咁點解......(之後我就係個櫃度拎番果個公仔同果張子出黎~)<BR>我 : 咁點解你會留哩d野比我.....<BR>森 : 因為我唔容許佢搶左你....<BR>我 : 唔會ga啦.....你唔好傷害佢ar......我地已經分開左中學ga啦...<BR>唔會再見ga啦......<BR>森 : (佢係咁望住我)(笑左笑)我要走la....記住呀你永遠都係屬於我ga....<BR>唔知點解....我聽完哩句之後.........好驚.....<BR>我點可以一世都同隻鬼一齊.....放棄朋友.....我既愛.......<BR>呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR>成晚都訓唔著.....媽呀.....點解要比我遇到森仔同ar深呀??<BR>唔通一世都比哩個&lt;森&gt;字玩殘.......
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:10:43 | 显示全部楼层
到左派位果一日.....要睇下自己入左邊間......番到去.....<BR>我比人迫到冇晒位.....冇lala有人拍我.,....<BR>ar深 : 你係唔係睇唔到呀....我幫你睇la....<BR>我 :哦,,,,,,<BR>ar深 : 你入左間鬼校ar....(一路望一路同我講)<BR>我 : 咁你入左邊間呀?.....(我都估到ga啦....我d咁既人邊有人收ga...)<BR>ar 深 : xx學校.....<BR>冇錯....佢入左佢既理想中學....而我???入果間......所謂既鬼校....<BR>你地都估到入面有d咩ga啦...<BR>果間中學係好耐以前發生過一場火災,,,<BR>燒死左好多個學生.........自從果日開始哩間學校就傳有鬧鬼....<BR>每一年總係會有d野發生......好多人都唔會揀哩間學校黎入......<BR>入左果d都係全部被迫要入去既......而哩間學校亦都有好多人想入.....點解 ??<BR>佢地想入去睇下係唔係真係咁猛lo.........聽果度d學生講......如果天黑之前唔走既話...<BR>就會有怪事發生......所以一放學d學生就拿拿臨走老.......<BR>d miss ar sir....都一樣.....如果唔係經濟既問題....佢地都唔會係度任教,,,,,<BR>我既命運就係咁黑仔......我就要面臨哩間學校..... <BR>暑假日日都係咁過.....丫深同我玩既次數....由日日玩....<BR>變成一個禮拜///再一個月....再唔搵我.....<BR>而森仔日日都陪我傾計......佢真係越大越靚仔呀....<BR>如果佢而加係人....既話,,,,一定會好受女仔歡迎姐......不過........<BR>如果佢係人....我已經係佢女朋友la.........<BR>到左新開學果一日......我上到去班房......oh.,...1班10個人都冇.....<BR>仲要成班得2個女仔.....有7個男仔.......其中一個女仔仲要係自己黎......<BR>果個miss安排另一個女仔坐我隔離.......佢好靚ga....隻眼好大下.......<BR>因為我唔多鐘意講野.....所以成堂都唔同佢溝通.....<BR>而我前面同後面都係男仔黎既.....<BR>miss : 相信你地都知道哩間學校既背景ga啦.......<BR>所以你地一放學請你唔好再留係學校la......成班都要跟住我走......<BR>而如果果一日天文台話會落雨既話.....果日就唔洗番學......明唔明白 ??<BR>冇人應佢......<BR>miss : (指一個男同學)你明唔明ar?<BR>男仔 : 明....<BR>miss : 咁就當大家都明ga啦.....<BR>開始上堂.............<BR>我隔離果個女仔問我 ....<BR>隔離果個女仔 : 你點解會入哩間學校??<BR>我 : 被迫.....<BR>隔離果個女仔 : 你係唔係有陰陽眼ga??<BR>我 : 你又知??<BR>隔離果個女仔 : 有陰陽眼既人隻眼會有粒綠色既點係度....<BR>咁我見到你有......咁我就知你有啦......<BR>我 : 哦........(咁都知??佢係唔係研究鬼果d野ga??)<BR>隔離果個女仔 : 係呢.....我叫ar芯....多多指教.....<BR>我 : ar芯 ??? 哦哦.....我叫小津,,,,(又芯??)<BR>芯 : 哦.....成班得我地係女仔.....咁我地就做好朋友la.....<BR>我 : 哦...好呀...<BR>芯 : 以後有咩同我講得ga啦,,,,,你見到既野我都見到......<BR>我係自願入哩間學校ga......我係同我條仔一齊入黎ga.....<BR>我 : 哦.....咁你條仔呢??(已經學到講d粗野la)<BR>芯 : 呢....坐係我後面果個咪係lo.....<BR>之後我就望下佢.......有種似層相識既感覺.........<BR>芯 : 佢都有陰陽眼ga....<BR>我 : 哦.......(咁即係唔識佢la....我未識過一個人係有陰陽眼ga,.,,,) <BR>係哩個時候........冇lala有個男仔拍門入黎.....<BR>下.....佢咪就係....ar康 ???點解佢會係度既?<BR>佢入左黎哩間學校???<BR>miss : 做咩咁遲ar??<BR>康 : 岩岩...校長叫我去搵佢.....<BR>miss : 好la......咁你搵番個位坐la.....<BR>佢好似見到我既存在.....之後就坐左係我後面lu....<BR>即係同ar芯條仔一齊坐.....<BR>ar康 : e.....原來你入左黎哩間學校ar??<BR>我 : 係呀....你都係姐....<BR>ar康 : 係ar.....咁我地多多關照la....<BR>我 : 好呀.....<BR>我入左黎哩間學校...成個人變得冇咁自閉左......起碼講野都講多左小小咁la....<BR>第一日既番學就係咁過左lu.....<BR>今日之後先知....原來我唔係咁恐怖ga炸.....<BR>放學lu.....<BR>ar芯 : 小津....我同條仔走先la.....聽日見la....<BR>我 : 哦....好呀....(我真係覺得ar芯條仔真係好熟口面呢...究竟邊個黎ga呢...)<BR>之後就番屋企lu........我一直番去一直諗.....
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:11:11 | 显示全部楼层
唔知ar深今日番學點呢....<BR>我又會唔會撞到佢呢......<BR>點知,.....話口未完.....見到la.....<BR>佢就迎面咁行緊過黎,,,,,,死la.....我應該點同佢打招呼好呢.....<BR>佢越行越近.....我見到佢隔離有個女仔.,,,,,,<BR>心諗....<BR>點,,,,,,解,,,,會咁ga??<BR>我望住佢地..... <BR>我究竟應該點做呢.....越行就越近la....<BR>((我一直留意ar深旁邊果位女仔..))<BR>突然,,,,,,,,<BR>深 :喂......<BR>(佢係唔係叫我呢.......我望下我既後面再望下我既隔離.....<BR>冇人bo.....佢究竟係唔係叫我呢??)<BR>深 : 叫你呀.....發晒呆咁.....(佢用隻手係我面前掃下)<BR>津 :哦.....(心入面好開心)<BR>深 :好耐都未見過你la.....好掛住你呀......今日番學點呀??<BR>(我心諗....你做咩會係哩個女仔面前同我講d咁既野ga???)<BR>我 :吾..幾好呀!<BR>深:你自己一個女仔係果度驚唔驚呀?<BR>我 :我仲恐怖la..冇咩野好驚..<BR>(佢同以前唔同左呀..佢以前每句野都玩玩下既..)<BR>深:我都知ar康都入左哩間中學..我會叫佢睇實你ga啦..<BR>  如果有人蝦你..佢一定保護你..<BR>(點解唔係你喎...)<BR>我:哦..知la..唔左你地la..(真係好唔願意講哩句)<BR>深:好la..icq聯絡你la..(我真係左住你咩?)<BR>我:哦..(之後佢地就走左lu)<BR>唔知佢地去邊呢..而我??行左好耐先番到屋企..<BR>我個心唔知做咩好唔開心呀..好想一次過嗌晒出黎..<BR>番去我等佢icq hi我..點知等左好耐都冇..<BR>佢一直都係away..<BR>隨手又拎左本日記寫la..<BR>((今天..我遇見了他..我和他很久沒見了..他比從前還要帥得多..<BR>高得多了..我看見他旁邊有位女生時..我感到自己有小小醋意..<BR>很想她在這個世界消失..我自問..樣子..我比她優勝..<BR>金錢...我勝過她很多..我看見她的皮鞋..像隻開口再合口的小鴨..<BR>她的毛衣..穿了什多的洞..一補再補..她的眼晴..像一條線那麼的幼..<BR>身形..比我還要胖..我懷疑自己是否連白天也遇鬼呢??<BR>但因我還未清楚她是ar深的什麼..<BR>我只好在遙遠看著她..希望她不要死纏繞著深..))<BR>我等左佢成晚佢都冇on過呀.......佢講過既野...點解可以唔算數ga.....<BR>咪埋左隻眼一陣.......回憶左好多同ar深既野........連自己都引唔住笑左笑....<BR>我係人...我應該同人一齊......我係一個女仔...我亦都需要愛情.....<BR>需要保護....需要人地鍚.......需要朋友......我更需要一個深愛我的愛人......<BR>點解個天唔比我,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,要我同佢(深)分開.......<BR>仲要d鍚我既人受苦......我仲要親手殺死..........最鍚我....愛我既人.......<BR>諗到哩度......我d眼淚一滴一滴咁流..................<BR>係果一刻...我感覺到有一隻手.......正係度..抹緊我面上既眼淚,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, <BR>我隻眼慢慢慢慢咁撐大........森仔佢黎左......<BR>我見到佢一日比一日消瘦.........個樣好恐怖.......<BR>我 :森仔,,,,,<BR>森:唔好喊la,,,,,,有咩事令你咁唔開心ar,,,,,<BR>我 :呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( 攬住佢 )<BR>森:你真係咁鐘意佢?<BR>我:係...<BR>森:點解你要咁對我呀..<BR>我:(喊喊喊)<BR>森:佢唔會鐘意你ga..世界上得我一個鍚你ga炸..<BR>  你明唔明呀?我會一直咁保護你ga..<BR>我:唔係唔係..你係鬼..<BR>森:一直係你身邊保護你照顧你果個係我呀..唔係佢呀..<BR>  你話會愛我一生一世ga..你話ga..<BR>我:我好亂呀..唔好迫我呀...我好辛苦呀..(嗌出黎)<BR>森:對唔住呀..你唔好咁la..<BR>我:(喊喊喊)<BR>森:哎呀..!!好痛呀..(禁住個肚..佢個肚曾經比我插過好多刀..)<BR>我:點呀..你冇野呀麻...唔好嚇我呀,,<BR>森:冇事...可能個傷口發炎la,,冇事ga..<BR>我:點呀..你又唔可以睇醫生..我應該點呀..<BR>森:我冇野ga..我扮野嚇你之麻..見你咁擔心我..<BR>  即係你仲鐘意我la..(笑左笑..)我聽日先黎探你la..<BR>我:你係唔係真係冇事ga..(未講完..佢已經走左lu)<BR>我又係度喊la..我好多野好擔心呀..<BR>我更加擔心既係森仔呀...佢係鬼黎ga..<BR>我可以點呀??天呀..希望你冇事la..我仲好需要你ga..<BR>過左冇幾耐..喊喊下我聽到有人叫我..係一把女人聲黎既..<BR>女人:小津..(好淒慘既喊聲)<BR>我覺得哩把聲好熟呀...我再望下佢...見到佢冇左2隻手..<BR>口角有血..左邊面有好多一條條好深既傷痕..仲有d玻璃碎插住係塊面度..<BR>原來佢係......... <BR>森仔個ar媽..佢個樣好恐怖呀,,,,,.<BR>我一直咬住張 [ 被 ]....點解,,,,佢,,,,,會黎哩度搵我ga,,,,,<BR>我 :ar姨,,,,,你.............點解.....會係.,,,,,,,,,,,,,度既.....(好驚)<BR>森媽:小津,,,,,,其實ar姨都唔想用咁既樣對住你,,,,,但係,,,,,冇辦法ga啦,,,<BR>我 :下...,,,(震晒)<BR>森媽慢慢飄過去我果面,,,,,我實在太驚la,,,嗌左出黎....<BR>我:牙!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!你唔好過黎ar..<BR>係哩個時候.....我ar媽開左我個房門....望左幾下我間房,,,<BR>媽:ar女....咩事呀??<BR>我:(我望住森媽),,,下.....冇呀!!<BR>媽:咁早d訓la......<BR><BR>我:哦..(之後ar媽走左)<BR>---------------------------------------------------------------------<BR>森媽:你唔好咁驚la...我黎哩度既目的只係想求你....放過我個仔la....(流眼淚)<BR>我:??你,,,,,,,我,,,,唔明,.,,你講,,,,緊,,,,咩喎.........森媽:我求下你la..我知道哩4年黎,,,,每晚我個仔都黎哩度陪住你.....<BR>   4年la,,,,佢既時間唔多ga啦 !!<BR>我:時間唔多??<BR>森媽:係,,,,,,如果佢再唔走,,,,佢就唔可以再投胎ga啦 !!...哩4年黎..<BR>   我一直都周圍搵緊佢/,,,,係我對佢唔住,.,,,,,(喊得好西利呀!!)<BR>我:ar姨ar....你唔好咁la,,,,,<BR>森媽:我係自殺ga...我冇得再投胎ga啦.....但係佢仲細個ar..<BR>   佢仲可以再做番人....我想佢下一世會搵到一個鍚佢既爸爸媽媽ar.....<BR>我:,,,,,,,,,,,,,(喊埋)<BR>森媽:如果佢再唔走,,,,佢就,,,,,做一隻遊魂野鬼ga啦,,,,,求下你叫佢番去投胎la..<BR>我:我會ga 啦,,,,,,,,,,對唔住呀......如果,,,,,,,,,,唔係我,,,,,,<BR>  佢就唔洗死,,,,,,,佢就會一早投左胎,,,,,,唔洗攪到而加咁la.....(喊住講)<BR>森媽:一切都整定ga,,,,,,唔關你事......要怪都怪我唔識做人ar媽,,,,,,<BR>係哩個時候......有2個人,,,,,,一個牛頭....一個馬面既人......係森媽後面行緊過黎,,,,,<BR>佢地係黎接森媽走,,,,,,,<BR>森媽:小津,,,,,,,,我時日無多la,,,,,我再唔走......我就會煙燒雲散ga 啦,,,,,,<BR>   你記住叫佢去投胎ar.....佢唔係屬於哩一個空間ga..<BR>   叫佢去應該去既地方,.,,,,,,,我下一世會好好報答你ga,,,,,,,,<BR>   記住叫佢去投胎呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!呀!!!!!!!!!!!!呀!!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR>一度白光,,,,,令我見唔到眼前既一切,,,,,,,,開番眼既時候......<BR>ar姨,,,已經唔見左la,,,,,,而我,,,,,,訓左係度係咁喊,,,,,,<BR>森仔真係為左我做左好多野.......佢寧願唔去投胎都陪住我,,,,,,<BR>&gt;&lt;喊過不停,,,,,, <BR>喊喊喊.....喊左好耐la,,,,,,,一早又要再番學la....成晚都係度落住大雨......<BR>本身諗住唔洗番學ga麻.......點知....停左雨,,,,,,,所以就要番學la<BR>出門口果陣...見到ar深,,,,,,,<BR>深:e,,,,,番學la??<BR>我:吾..<BR>(好冷淡,,因為,,,,,我想忘記佢,,,,,,我要比我自己知.,,,我鐘意既係森仔...)<BR>深:做咩用咁既面口對我ar....<BR>我:,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,(唔想再同佢講咁多野)<BR>落到樓下.....因為唔同路.....分散左黎行,,,,,,<BR>深:我行哩度ar..下次傾la..88,,,<BR>我:88.....(唉....都唔知自己點做人ga)
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:11:49 | 显示全部楼层
番到學校.....<BR>芯:hihi....我既朋友仔,,,,,,,(拖住ar言.....ar言係佢條仔)<BR>我:hi....<BR>芯:做咩咁大個黑眼圈既??咩事呀??<BR><BR>我:冇事ar..<BR><BR>言:有咩同我地講喎......<BR>我:吾..(又關佢事)之後上堂......有一堂冇miss上既.......之後成班係度玩,,,,,勁嘈,,,,,<BR>冇lala落起大雨黎,,,,,,,連學校都停埋電,,,,,個天又黑蚊蚊咁,,,,,睇唔睇到人都成題,,,,<BR>我地班成班友仔......都走晒.....驚死,,,,,,,(我地個課室係學校既最高果層,,,9樓)<BR>康:wo.....落雨喎....即係番得屋企la..我:係喎...........應該走得la喎.....<BR>芯:咁行la.....<BR>其中一個同學仔:係呀....仲唔快d走,,,,,,<BR>        miss話一落雨就唔可以係哩間學校ga la....(衝走左)<BR>言:係喎..咁我地要快d走la,,,,,,,如果唔係一陣走唔設,,,,,<BR>之後我地4個 (我,,,,,康,,,,言,,,,,,芯) 就汁野走......我地個課室係9樓,,,,,,,(冇4樓哩層的)<BR>我地一路跑呀跑....跑呀跑.....一層比一層黑呢.,,,,,,我地跑到其中一層停低,,,,,,,,,(冇氣)<BR>言:嘩.......點解我地仲係9樓ga?? ( 只係見到有dd光.....身都睇唔到...)<BR>康:嘩..唔好玩la.....唔好講笑喎......(好驚)<BR>言:鬼得閒同你講笑呀,,,,,你自己睇下個牌la....(控埋去睇)<BR>康:嘩..係喎.....好邪呀,,,,點算ar......小津呢??應下我la...我見唔到你ar.,,,<BR>我:我係度呀,,,,,,唔好理咁多la,,,,,跑la,,,,,<BR>之後我地就係咁跑係咁跑......冇lala.....<BR>言:哎呀!!好痛呀..<BR>我:做咩呀..<BR>言:比人撞到ar......ar康..睇路la...周圍撞人,,,,<BR>康:喂,,,邊有撞你ar....我係你令一邊ar.....<BR>言:喂..係就認左佢la....唔好搵d咁既野黎玩喎.....<BR>康:厄你做咩呀..都話冇落..<BR>我:唔好自己嚇自己la.,,,,,行快d la..<BR>之後我地就衝出左哩間學校la.....一出到去....係咁比雨淋......<BR>我:好險呀..<BR>言:e,,唔見左ar芯既??ar芯呢..??<BR>康:係喎,,,,,岩岩你唔係拖住佢ga咩..<BR>言:係呀..我比人撞左野之後就冇拖到佢la....我都見唔到佢.,,,,,<BR>我,,,康,,,,,言:(我地你眼望我眼) 唔係咁邪ar??? <BR>我:喂....咁而加點呀??企係度ar???快d諗計la....<BR>言:可以點呀咁.......停埋電....我地而加咩都冇.....電筒都冇呀<BR>康:佢有冇戴電話ar??<BR>言:有呀有呀..我而加即刻打比佢,,,,,(好緊張咁)<BR>我同康就望住佢.......言拎住個電話望住我地.......<BR>言:死la....仲未有人聽ga......<BR>我:點算好ar,,,,,,,(我好驚呀)<BR>===============================================<BR>言:有人聽la .....(開左免提.....我同康控埋去聽...)<BR>言:喂??丫芯,.,,,,,,你係邊呀...應下我la.....<BR>我地只係聽到好大既落雨聲,,,,,,,<BR>我:芯,,,,,講句野la....你而加係學校邊度呀??<BR>芯:(越講越細聲,,聽唔到佢講咩)我,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,而,,,,,,加........係.......<BR>我:聽唔到ar....大聲d好冇???<BR>芯:唔,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,知,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,我,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,<BR>言:你唔好嚇我ar,,,,,你講比我聽你而加係邊la......<BR>芯:,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,呀!!!! (do do do do do....cut左線)<BR>言:喂,,,,,丫芯呀....唔好嚇我呀....(係咁拍部電話)<BR>我:cut左la..死la...點算好ar??<BR>康:點解會咁ga.......再打過la..<BR>丫言之後又再打多次..<BR>(你而加打既電話未能接通,,,,,請遲d再打電話黎la..)<BR>我地個個都唔知可以做d咩好..<BR>康:一係入去搵佢la.....<BR>我:你痴線ga....入左去又搵唔到佢....又出唔番黎仲死ar..<BR>  到時又要我地擔心多個,,,,,,,<BR>言:咁點ar........<BR>就係哩個時候我見到有個伯伯準備行入去間學校入面,,,,
吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:12:16 | 显示全部楼层
我:伯伯...唔好入去ar..(大聲嗌)<BR>個伯伯行埋黎......<BR>伯伯:我唔係伯伯..我係哩間學校既校工.,..,,你地仲係度做咩呀?<BR>   仲唔走??想死ar??(佢有半塊爛左ga,,,,個樣好恐怖)<BR>康:我地都好想走..伯伯..我地有個同學係入面仲未出黎ar.....<BR>校工:都話左我唔係伯伯落,,,,你地做咩掉低佢一個係入面呀....<BR>   明知落雨就要拿拿臨走老ga啦!!而加d細路.....真係唔聽話......<BR>我:伯伯..唔係..校工叔叔....我都知係我地唔岩.....<BR>  唔錯都錯左落..點算ar..<BR>校工:你地係度等一陣la...我入去睇下入面既情況.....<BR>康:伯伯..你唔驚呀?<BR>校工:驚咩呀.....我係哩間學校做左好耐ga啦.....有咩未見過....<BR>言:唔好講咁多la.....入去救人先la.....<BR>之後校工叔叔就入左去lu.....而我地就係果度等..... <BR>康:喂,,,,,,,果個爛面伯伯攪唔攪得掂ga?<BR>我:唔知佢呀 !! 佢攪唔掂係唔係你去攪呀??<BR>康:唔係......<BR>言:死la.......都唔知邊個撞我.....如果唔係果個人撞我芯而加就唔會咁la......<BR>我:唔好話自己la.....而加都有人救緊佢出黎la......<BR>言:救唔到咪死..你都知哩間咩學校黎ga啦......<BR>康:唔好咁la..睇下點先la........要對果位伯伯有信心..<BR>到左4點鐘.......<BR>個伯伯同ar芯一齊行出黎ar.....<BR>我:ar芯呀....(揮手...)<BR>ar言即刻跑過去ar芯度攬住佢,.,.,,,<BR>言:對唔住ar....我唔應該咁對你ga.....我應該好好咁保護你ga....<BR>芯:(係咁喊)我自己一個好驚ar..我好後悔入左黎哩間學校ar..<BR>言:對唔住.......對唔住呀.......你擔心死我la..點呀你有冇事ar?<BR>((ar芯d手腳損晒,,,,,,,,塊面有一條血痕.....隻眼白色果部分.....沾滿晒血....))<BR>芯:有呀.....成身都好痛.........<BR>言:我陪你番屋企先la........<BR>芯:唔得ga......番屋企....會嚇親我屋企人ga......<BR>言:咁黎我屋企la......(ar言同ar芯就行先...)<BR>=====================================================<BR>我:伯伯..好多謝你ar.....<BR>康:係呀....伯伯.......我以你為榮呀........你點救到佢出黎ga?<BR>校工:你地個朋友仔已經闖左大鍋la,,,,,你地要好好咁睇住佢.......<BR>   如果唔係..我救都救唔到佢,,,,,,,走先la.....快d番屋企la..<BR>============================================================<BR>之後校工叔叔就走左lu....之後我地就齊齊上左ar言屋企....<BR>一入到去.....見到ar言幫ar芯洗傷口......而ar芯係咁喊......喊唔停咁....<BR>我:唔好喊la,,,,,,喊左唔靚女ga啦.......你個言言唔鐘意你ga啦.....<BR>康:係lo..<BR>言:唔好咁la.....我好心痛ga......你今晚係我屋企訓la.......<BR>芯:(up頭)<BR>我:咁我同ar康走先la......(因為我今晚要等森仔....)<BR>番到屋企.....我又再次提起筆.....拎我本日記簿度寫野.....<BR>唔知點解我總係覺得哩本日記簿好有靈性......<BR>次次寫d咩落去.....總會有野發生既......<BR>今日寫完日記之後....我就訓係度等森仔黎la.....<BR>夜晚搭正12點.......森仔如常黎搵我......不過今晚係我見佢既最後一晚,,,,<BR>我一直望住佢.......望左佢好耐,,,,,d眼淚不禁一滴一滴咁流出.......<BR>佢一日比一日殘.....佢既面色一日比一日差.....哩d全部都係我累佢ga....<BR>森:係咪見到我開心得濟呢......所以喊晒口呀??<BR>我:森仔.....好多謝你咁耐以黎都陪我......死左都冇忘記過我......(係咁喊)<BR>森:傻妹.....做咩講埋d咁既野ar?(抹我面上既眼淚)<BR><BR>我:我之前真係有諗過你會陪我一世ga.....但係.....(越喊越勁)<BR><BR>森:我會陪你一世ga,,,,,哩個係我對你講既承諾,,,,<BR><BR>我:唔得..,...唔得,,,,唔可以ga......我以後都唔想再見到你...(係咁擰頭)<BR><BR>森:你,,,,,,,,係,,,,度,,,,,講....咩 呀??<BR><BR>我:我唔想見到你咁既樣ar......你好恐怖呀!! ( 要佢走惟一既方法,,, )<BR><BR>森:點解你要咁樣講ar..... <BR><BR>我:你走la...我以後都唔想再見到你.......我已經大個ga啦.....唔洗你照顧呀.....<BR>  我已經唔鐘意你la.......你唔好咁低能諗住係度陪我一世la....我.........我忍夠la.,...<BR>  你係鬼....我係人呀......我想要既野.....你永遠都比唔到我ga....(大嗌大喊)<BR><BR>森:點解你今日咁ga......你係唔係唔開心ar......定係我做錯d咩呀?<BR><BR>我:係...你做錯左好多好多野........你錯就錯在識左我.......<BR>  你唔好比自己再錯落去la,,,,,,你唔係屬於哩一個空間ga....你去投胎....<BR>  忘記我la.......<BR><BR>森:唔得,,,,,,你點可以咁絕情ga.....我地幾多年感情呀??你一句唔鐘意我....<BR>  就諗住踢我走,,,,,驚我纏住你??<BR><BR>我:唔係呀,,唔係呀,,(一路喊一路係咁擰頭..)<BR><BR>森:你唔想見到我ar麻..咁我走lo....你唔好後悔呀....(之後佢就轉個頭就走la....)<BR><BR>我:(對住佢背面講)唔理點都好..你記得去投胎ar..<BR>   對..唔..住..呀..(喊喊喊)<BR><BR>走左la......永遠唔會再番黎ga la,,,,,, ,,,,,,佢永遠都會消失ga啦,,,,,<BR><BR>佢唔會再係度陪我........佢唔會再哄我,,,,,,佢唔會再黎哩度ga啦.......<BR><BR>我拎住我同佢一齊影既合照......(好細個)一路摸住森仔個樣一邊講....一邊喊....<BR><BR>我:森仔.....我唔會後悔ga.......我唔想你為左我放棄更多野呀,,,,,你比我既已經夠ga啦<BR>  我見到你個樣,,,,,,,,我好心痛呀....你記得去投胎ar.....我會一直咁祝福你ga.....<BR>  下一世.....你一定會係一個幸福既屋企出世....搵到一個真真正正對你好既女朋友......<BR>  從此你唔會再記得..小津哩個人..係你身邊出現過.........(講到d度我又忍唔住係咁喊la)<BR>佢走左.....我連同佢影相既機會都冇.......我真係好唔捨得佢呀......<BR>我自己同自己講...<BR>我:x小津..由聽日開始要改變自己.......從此咩都自己攪掂......<BR>  森仔..我一定唔會要你擔心ga,,,,我會將你永永遠遠留係我心入面.. <BR>成晚,,,,我都冇訓過....太傷心la....成晚都只係諗住佢....
Laputa81 发表于 2006-5-22 22:21:11 | 显示全部楼层
<P>小说就唔睇啰!!!!!</P>
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吹啊 发表于 2006-5-22 22:23:45 | 显示全部楼层
一蕉早見到個黑眼圈好大好大....真係好似隻熊貓咁......<BR>我決定左唔番學la.......費是番去嚇親人la......ka...<BR>下晝.......我收到ar康既電話.....<BR>康:小津..做咩今日唔番學呀??好掛住你呀.....<BR>我:下,,,,,我唔舒服呀....(我唔想聽到d甜言蜜語)<BR>康:邊度唔舒服呀?有冇睇醫生呀?<BR>我:睇左la......唔傾la.....想訓呀...88<BR>康:哦..咁好la...一陣上去探你la....<BR>我:哦..88<BR>之後就cut左線la.......係咁喊係咁喊......<BR>冇lala個電話又響la....今次係ar芯黎既.....<BR>我:又做咩呀?(我以為係ar康)<BR>芯:津..sor呀...我唔係想煩你ga....<BR>我:係你呀??唔係呀我唔係話你煩呀...我係話ar康之麻....<BR>  係呢?你冇番學既..?<BR>芯:冇呀.......我好驚呀而加....<BR>我:你而加係邊呀?<BR>芯:係ar言屋企呀.......我好驚呀.....<BR>我:唔好咁驚la.....有我陪你喎..一係你黎我屋企la.....<BR>芯:好呀...我而加過黎la....<BR>之後佢就過左黎我屋企la.....我同ar芯就係間房度傾秘密.......<BR>芯:嘩..你隻眼做咩呀/<BR>我:冇呀..訓唔著,,,,<BR>芯:因為哩個男仔呀?(拍住張相入面既森仔)<BR>我:下..<BR>芯:你哩間房好邪..<BR>我:(笑左笑...果然暪唔過佢......咁我咪一次過講晒比佢知lo...)<BR>講左一大輛......<BR>芯:佢對你好好呀..(係咁喊)你真係捨得佢呀?<BR>我:唔捨得都要la.....佢始終都唔係人......係呢...唔好講我啦.... <BR>  講番你la......你d傷仲有冇事呀??點解隻眼.....d血....越黎越過既??<BR>  就黎係埋眼珠度啦喎!!<BR>芯:唔知點解呀我都..<BR>我:其實果日你...發生咩事ga??? <BR>芯:其實果日我都好多野唔明ga.....我果陣明明一路拖住ar言既..<BR>  我都唔明ar言點解冇lala鬆手.....我嗌佢...都冇人應我.......<BR>  我又唔知係邊喎..明明落緊樓梯..突然之間條樓梯好似唔見左咁....<BR>  都唔知去左邊..之後行行下就唔知係邊度跌左落去..有一支好尖既野..<BR>  一野插左落隻眼度..咁而加隻眼咪變成咁lo,,,我係咁喊..<BR>  冇lala就係有個人拉住我係咁跑...落到去就見到你地la..<BR>我:邊有呀..我地都聽唔到你嗌我地..<BR>芯:有ga...嗌破喉呀.....<BR>我:ar言唔知比邊個冇lala撞到......所以拖唔到你炸.....<BR>  咁你有冇見到〔果聽野〕呀?<BR>芯:冇喎..咩都望唔到..好似盲左咁..而哩隻眼又一日比一日西利..<BR>我:真係好唔掂呀..冇見你一晚隻..隻眼變成咁既..<BR>  不如去睇下醫生la...??<BR>芯:哩d野邊有人醫到我ga..(果聽野)要玩我..都冇計ga?<BR>我:你又知佢地玩緊你..(好緊張)<BR>芯:唔係咩?你正常比一支咁尖既針吉落去..盲梗呀..<BR>  但係我而加仲睇到野喎..真奇怪..<BR>我:咁你知唔知自己去左邊ar??你以後唔好周圍走啦.....知唔知呀??<BR>  (因為我諗起果個校工叔叔講既野..所以要暗示比佢聽..)<BR>芯:知la..識左你都唔係好耐姐,,不過已經覺得你份人好好la....<BR>我:你都係姐..我估唔到你對<鬼>哩樣野係咁準ga..<BR>  一入到黎我間房就知邊個黎過..又知森仔已經死左..<BR>芯:係ga..我自細已經知道關於令一個空間既好多好多野..<BR>  哩樣都唔例外..<BR>我:咁你知唔知佢(森仔)而加有冇去投胎呀?<BR>芯:你想知?我唔話你知.. <BR>我:咁你話我知佢下一世會做d咩?<BR>芯:哩d冇咁快知ga,,,,<BR>我:哎.....都唔知佢而家點..........<BR>(傾傾下,,,ar芯嗌左出黎)<BR>芯:哎呀!!! 好痛ar,..........救命ar.........(com住隻傷左既眼)<BR>我:喂,,做咩呀你........唔好嚇我wo..........<BR>芯:我唔知呀!! 好痛ar........<BR>我:(見到有好多.....好多....血係隻眼果度流出黎)<BR>好多血ar.....做咩事ar? (拎紙巾比佢)<BR>佢d血令到成塊紙巾都沾滿晒血.......我唔知點做好,......我好驚.......<BR>只係一直係咁拎紙巾比佢抹.............<BR>我:你縮開隻手比我睇下你隻眼................<BR>之後佢就縮開左隻手.............<BR>我:嘩!! 點,,,,,,點,,,,,,,解,,,,會,,咁,,,,,既,,,,,,,,,,,<BR>(我好驚.........突然覺得ar芯好恐怖)<BR>芯:做咩ar...?你唔好咁la....會嚇到我ga.......<BR>我係咁擰頭........見到佢成隻眼都係密密麻麻既血管.....成隻眼都係血,,,<BR>連眼珠同眼白都睇唔到.....好恐怖a....<BR>芯:點解我而加睇果d野淨係睇到一半既....另一半果全部都係紅色ga..........做咩會咁ga??下..............<BR>我:我......我......都唔知ar...你隻眼入面全部都係血ar......<BR>芯:下...................(之後走去照鏡)<BR>芯:呀!!!!!!! <BR>我:你唔好咁la....<BR>芯:我咁既樣....(係咁喊)<BR>我:(我見到佢隻眼一路流左d緣色既野出黎,一滴一滴咁)<BR>芯:好痛呀!(尖叫)好痛呀!(訓左係度冇反應..但係係爭大左隻既)<BR>我:(我驚到係咁喊..唔知點算好呀!!)<BR>d血流左好耐..我一路係佢身邊幫佢抹!d血慢慢都散左la...<BR>直至見番隻眼珠......咁岩哩個時候電話響.....
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